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Post by Captain Annie on Nov 26, 2005 21:59:15 GMT
i can see this story is going to make me cry .... i am loving it!! really really good
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Post by TRrocks on Nov 27, 2005 11:50:37 GMT
Thx for all ure comments! flick, i know what u mean, looking back at some of my fanfics, they were really awful! and i owe it to you guys that i have improved! Emma sat numb at the dinner table that day. all the children were gabbling away, stuffing their faces. she wasn't really listening to Cleo's ranting. she couldn't bare to. she had always loved living with loads of other children in a huge house, but now, she would of given anything to with with a normal small family. "..but of course i'll still go to the same school," cleo continued, she had two weeks to go before she went to live with her new parents. "Im sure someone will adopt you soon Em." Emma grimaced back at Cleo behind ehr back as Cleo began to tell her 'perfect' story to someone else. Emma limped slowly up the stairs. she closed the door to their room. they had spent so long making it perfect. perfectly pink. there were photos of smiling people all round the walls. of stars, animals, them, and even their original parents. Emma sat down looking lost in her own room, gazing at the lava and glitter lamps. all the cuddly toys. the big pink bean bags. and the rows of feathers and beads that hung from the ceiling. Emma smiled at all the memories this room held. Maybe it would of been better if Cleo had gone away altogether. if she went miles away. to a different school. it was like breaking up sisters. yet still knowing she would see her at school was unbearable. On the wall above their beds was writing, in a deep purple; 'Friends are the Family we chose for ourselves.' The tears welled up in Emma's eyes. now she didn't even have that family. more as soon as poss.
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Post by wilderbeest on Nov 27, 2005 16:16:53 GMT
It's making me cry.... But it's really good! :-)
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Post by TRrocks on Nov 29, 2005 18:19:43 GMT
Emma stood by the blank walls. she had always thought that they would leave at the same time. if they left at all. but now, half the room was bare. She heaved herself down the stairs to where Cleo was standing, with her adopted parents. and her mum. her real mum. Emma wasn't surprised by this, she knew that this would be the last time Cleo would ever see her natural mum unless she chose to see her at 18. Cleo ran to the bottom of the stairs, Emma forced out a smile, her eyes were red rimmed, she gulped and said, "I'll see you tomorrow." Cleo's face crumpled. she threw her arms around Emma's neck. Emma held on tight, as if for dear life. The two of them walked to the front of the care home. Cleo's stuff was already packed. The car was huge. one of those big 4-wheel things. Emma stopped and starred for a minute. she could only imagine the house they would have. Cleos new mum Anna leant over Emma and said, "You can come to play and for tea whenever you like Emma." This was the last straw for Emma. everything finally sunk in. Now, they were friends. and that was all. they had been together since the age of four! how could anyone ever take that away from them!? Emma would of run back to the house if she could. but instead she flew up the steps three at a time. and plonked herself at the window. Cleo sat in the back of the car as it slowly began to move. she looked up to the window, Emma leant forward and put her hand against the glass. Cleo did the same pressing hard against the car window. Emma watched as she drove down the road. until, finally, she was gone.
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Post by wilderbeest on Nov 29, 2005 21:43:55 GMT
Aww! I feel so so sorry for poor Emma.
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Post by Captain Annie on Nov 30, 2005 17:06:58 GMT
please please post more!
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Post by TRrocks on Nov 30, 2005 20:07:37 GMT
thx! im lovin da comments! The next day Emma woke up on her own. she went in the car to school, on her own. as she climbed out of the car, she saw the big metallic-black car swing up the drive. Cleo and her Mum got out. Emmas mouth dropped as she saw cleo. all her old style had gone. she was wearing designer from head to toe. Emma didnt move as she watched Cleos mum tie up her hair and hand her her medication. Cleo gulped heavily and then kissed her mum on the cheek and ran into the building. by this time Alice had gone crawling round to Anna. Emma sighed heavily and went off. on her own. in the classroom that morning Cleo was snatched up by what she and Emma used to call 'the plastics' the girls everyone loves and worships. but now she was a plastic. Emma hauled herself along the corridors. people pushing past her. once again she was numb. In the cantein that day. Emma sat alone. She groaned. how was she meant to hold onto her crutches and manage to carry her tray to the kitchen? she would have to walk without them. she hauled her worst leg behind her. she just manage to lean right forward and push the tray away. everything began to spin. she must of wobbled slightly because suddenly, holding onto her shoulder, was no other than Mrs. Griffin. Emma keeled round to see this face. she didnt say anything. "Why are you all alone Emma? you shoud always ask me for help. or someone else." by this time She had managed to sit Emma down. "Wheres your friend, cleo." "Shes gone." Emma murmered at the table. not bringing herself to look at those eyes. even thought they were caring, she still felt scared. "What do you mean. gone?" "She been adopted." emma said even quieter. "Well, would you like me to help you back to class?" "No. no im fine. thank you." Emma struggled back along the dark echoing corridor to class. now she felt that she finally understood why no one wanted her as their child. soz i know its sad, but it does have a happy ending!
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Post by wilderbeest on Nov 30, 2005 21:49:55 GMT
Good!
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Post by Flick on Dec 2, 2005 20:22:07 GMT
It's good and I'm glad it has a happy ending.
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Post by TRrocks on Dec 3, 2005 21:22:18 GMT
if any of you guys own any dramatic and love-type songs this is the time for them!
Emma walked along the corridor alone. she stumbled on the step she was flung forwards and books fell to the floor. Cleo and the 'plastics' crowded around her. they starred down at her on the floor. the leader bent down. she hauled Emma up and slammed her against the wall. Emma squirmed and tried to look away. Cleos heart rate tripled. the bottom falling of her stomach putting on a snooty voice she said airily; "Leave her Maddie, she not worth it." sticking her nose in the air. Maddie let go of Emma throwing her backwards. Emma stiltered slightly on her crutches but just managed to keep balance. she remebered this day for the rest of her life. how scared she had felt and all the terror that had happened. "You know what, you're right." said Maddie, who stood, arms folded with an evil grin. "You finished her, she too worthless for me." by now a circle had formed around the three of them. and cheering from the crowd. Emma and Cleo were pushed forward, 'FIGHT FIGHT FIGHT!' came form the background. Cleo knew it didn't take much. she simply took a few steps toward Emma and pushed her hard to the floor. Emma pulled herself back to her knees. everything was spinning. a sharp spear like pain travelled up her legs. Cleo pushed her again. the tears streamed down Emma's face. she slummed back down in desperation. The heard now moved on. all the plastics and their followers all continued up the corridor. Emma managed to focus on Cleo. Cleo had been pushed back by the crowd. her mouth was open and shaking. her eyes wide and watery. she gave Emma one last glance. and then she ran. ran away. right away. determined to escape. everything was now a dark shape. the pain had travelled all the way to her hips. her head was throbbing. was she going to die? was she dying? her whole bady flopped to cold wodden floor. she closed her eyes... Emma heard footsteps. she craned her neck to see them coming towards her. they didn't. they swerved off. she let her excruitating head fall back down again. she tried to move her legs. she couldn't. tears were streaming out of the corners off her eyes and onto the floor. she heard footsteps again. they were confident ones. they were Mrs. Griffin. As Mrs. Griffin turned the corner she saw the lifeless bundle curled on the floor. as its head moved she saw Emma's desperate face. She dropped the papers in her hands and flew to Emma's side. Emmas began gabbling. "Help me. hip. legs." Mrs. Griffin held tightly to Emma's hand. Emmas gripped back. her face was drenched in sweat. her dark hair falling all over the place. Emma could barely tell it was Mrs. Griffin. The paramedics soon burst in. they heaved her onto a stretcher taking her away from Mrs. Griffin. "NO!" belowed Emma. "DONT.LEAVE ME. please. promise." If it hadn't been for determination Louise Griffin would collapsed into tears. but she couldnt do that. she slipped one hand back into Emma's. and the other on the side of Emma's face. "Im here. its ok. i wont leave you. im coming with you." Emma clund on so tight that it almost made Louise Griffin realize that whatever this girl had been through. was not exactly an enjoyable. it had to be stopped but this deliacate girls health and need for her was top most right now....
more soon! ;D
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Post by Captain Annie on Dec 3, 2005 21:46:15 GMT
*song in the cd player* right, i am ready to read!
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Post by Captain Annie on Dec 3, 2005 21:49:36 GMT
awwwww poor emma, feel so sorry for her
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Post by Flick on Dec 3, 2005 22:00:29 GMT
OMG!!! How could Cleo do thar to Emma?? It's bullying! I'm sure she didn't want to do it though, the way you described her looking back with tears in her eyes. Proper bullies don't do that.
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Post by Captain Annie on Dec 4, 2005 18:31:12 GMT
but proper friends dont either proper friends dont turn their back on people. Poor Emma, i feel so sorry for her
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Post by TRrocks on Dec 4, 2005 18:58:20 GMT
Emma's stretcher was carried out to the front of school. Emma was still gripped incredibly tightly to Mrs.Griffin's hand. Emma was heaved into the ambulance. a paramedic put his hand out to Mrs. Griffin "Are you relative?" "No im her hea- um principle." "Sorry you cant come in the ambulance." She finally snapped. desperate to be with Emma. she could hear her screaming out. "Oh, so youre just going tio send her to hospital all on her own are you!? this girl had no-one! so im goin to be their!" with that she turned on her heels and clambered into Ambulance. Emma had been hooked up to everything possible. her face was covered in an oxygen mask. Mrs. Griffin sat opposite this tiny girls body. Emma stuck out her thin arm in the direction of Mrs. Griffin. "Miss. im scared. dont let them hurt me." her voice was one of panic, fear, and the greatest pain. Mrs. Griffin was sick of being that. she wished she could just be her. she wanted to break down and cry. she slipped her hand back into Emma's. as the trolley burst through casualty's doors Alice came running upto them. after explaining who she was Louise Griffin was pushed completely out of the picture. as they wheeled Emma away she was left standing. completely alone. a white corridor surrounding her. completely alone. in this building. in that school. in the whole country! soz i know this bit is rubbish!
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