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Post by wilderbeest on Dec 5, 2005 3:18:59 GMT
No, it's not! Not at all! I'm fairly sure I can see where this is heading though!
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Post by Captain Annie on Dec 5, 2005 16:43:47 GMT
Yeah i have a good idea too! but it is still good!
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Post by TRrocks on Dec 7, 2005 16:43:59 GMT
yeah well its not all as simple as u guys might think!.......
Mrs. Griffin leant against the wall her hand clasped tightly around the hospital phone, "hello?" "honey? it me. look i need you to pick Petra up on you're way home. one of my pupils is in hospital and its really important to me that i stay here. is that ok?" for some reason her husband snapped. "well, Louise, no not really no. im not going to be back for ages. isnt it time that you paid attention to whats really important? for example your daughter? you're always working late or something and you claim you dont even like being here or the school." "Look! i may not like it but while you're doing this promotion surprisingly enough someones got to put food on the table! if you really feel that strongly I will go and get Petra after all you're life and convenience is obivously so much more important than that of a seriously ill ten year old!!" She slammed down the phone. tears of anger flooded her eyes. ever since moving here their realationship had not been right. what had gone wrong!?
after walking back to school. Louise Griffin climbed into her deep violet mercades and began to drive. her light brown hair billowing behind her shoulders. she speed along the motorway. the sun beat down on the road. the road was the same way that she felt in her life. deserted. she had to do something. hadn't she decided long ago never to walk in the shadows? always to walk with her dignity and determination. to do what she believed to be right? all of sudden she clamped her jaw together. pursed her lips. she would do what she thought was right. what was right. their was no hestitation. she pushed her boot down hard on the break. her car swerved across the road. she turned it round. they wouldnt take anything from her. her foot pushed the excelarator down as far as it would possibly go. the breaks screeced as the violet sports car skidded into the hospital car park. she forced back the double doors so that they banged on the walls. her feet carried her up the stairs. round the corner. she threw back another door. Emma screamed out to her although everything seemed to be silent and slowmotion. she sat in the chair next to Emmas weak body. Emma pushed back the doctors surrounding her. she threw herself into Louise Girffin's arms. she sobbed and sobbed. in relief that someone was there for her. and Louise Griffin didn't let go. for she would be there for her.
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Post by wilderbeest on Dec 8, 2005 22:28:34 GMT
Aww! By the way, how old's Petra?
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Post by TRrocks on Jan 3, 2006 18:17:46 GMT
petras 3. u guys im really soz, im going 2 av 2 forfit this story for all sorts of reasons so would any of u like 2 carry it on?? im really sorry
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Post by Captain Annie on Jan 3, 2006 21:02:40 GMT
awwwwwwwww! noooooooo!!! I don't think i would carry it on either, i wouldnt be able to do it justice
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Post by TRrocks on Jan 4, 2006 14:38:48 GMT
im writin 3 different stories @ once @ da mo so its all got a bit much. and i can only type 1 handed coz im in plaster from hand 2 shoulder, maybe i'll start it up again in a few months if no 1 else wants it, but if they do then i would love to see want they want 2 happen!
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